SoulofNowhere's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Dear Tom]

the gunshot your about to hear....

Is me blowing my brains out, but i have to admit; that was unexpected.

psychicpebbles responds:

That's what I was going for. THX

[Glass of Water]

a few problems

The lip syncing is for the most part good, there are just some parts were you start the voice acting to soon. The sound effects fit for the most part, but the main theme is a tad to quiet distracting us from the story. However, I loved the random scenario. All around great movie, but there is room for improvement!

OnionsXD responds:

Yes I know there is a lot wrong here now. Mainly because it was rushed and I know not to do that anymore. I have..or I like to think that I'm a little better at script writing now than when I was when I wrote this cartoon script. Sound effects for some reason have always been hard for me but now I got my friend to help me with it. A new episode should be out by either this or next month and it'll be loads betetr than this so keep an eye out!! :D